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Demoliton Man
(authors note-this is a somewhat unfinished idea that I've toyed with for a little while. I'd like to take this concept and somehow make it larger, more powerful -more erotic and I'd appreciate anyones help in helping me get this there)
Bio-mechanical Systems Activated
Systems Check Sequence Invoked
Systems Check...........OK
Attack Mode......Activated !!!!!
Woman, what do you see?
What do your eyes behold?
What is it you wish to hold, control here?
How do you make peace with the beast that lies within
Battle mode invoked, where do you begin?
This massive, naked specimen before your eyes
A vision of splendor; purpose by design
Mission: to extinguish the fire that's been ignited
deep within your loins
To calm your raging river
To love U till your tension's gone
Look and behold...................
The deep brown hue of my skin
The massiveness of my frame
The way the muscles of this body
wrap around bone
covered by flesh, stretched tightly,
beautifully, shapely and seductively.......
….........built for the pleasure of you, woman
The squaring of my jaw, shaping of my strong chiseled face
the fullness of my lips that are ready now to taste
the nectar that flows where you stand.........
Thy insatiable beast, I your demolition man
Look at me.........I breathe strongly , each breath fills my lungs
Body dripping with an erotic sweat
Prepared to get the job done...........completely
Aroused and ready-my chest broad and my nipples hard
My six pack, rippling, I can read your thoughts
Your reaction, “ Oh My God!”
Arms ripped and perfectly proportioned
You revel the size of my guns
I spin to the rear, I beckon you draw near
to touch, squeeze, to feel the tightness of these deep brown
cinnamon flavored buns......
…..so ready for action. Set to be your main attraction
Your mouth drops open in shock
as you take notice of the massiveness of this rock
Long, thick and excruciatingly hard
I stand before you- veins engorged, blood rushing
My beast does throb.
Ball in satchel drawn tight, pulled close and ready
Clear, pre-cum drip from open tip as steadily.........
....I focus on your hot wet core.
My mouth drips as I think of even more
delicious and decadent ways to slay thy wanton beast
To put your wet, creamy lust at peace.
Giving your body and soul the most
surreal, erotic, deeply molecular release
(your *pucci* will warmly ebb and flow
like the ocean's white foam in summer along
a hot, sandy beach.......)
O woman, what shall you do with me?
Bio-mechanical Systems Activated
Systems Check Sequence Invoked
Systems Check...........OK
Attack Mode......Activated !!!!!
Woman, what do you see?
What do your eyes behold?
What is it you wish to hold, control here?
How do you make peace with the beast that lies within
Battle mode invoked, where do you begin?
This massive, naked specimen before your eyes
A vision of splendor; purpose by design
Mission: to extinguish the fire that's been ignited
deep within your loins
To calm your raging river
To love U till your tension's gone
Look and behold...................
The deep brown hue of my skin
The massiveness of my frame
The way the muscles of this body
wrap around bone
covered by flesh, stretched tightly,
beautifully, shapely and seductively.......
….........built for the pleasure of you, woman
The squaring of my jaw, shaping of my strong chiseled face
the fullness of my lips that are ready now to taste
the nectar that flows where you stand.........
Thy insatiable beast, I your demolition man
Look at me.........I breathe strongly , each breath fills my lungs
Body dripping with an erotic sweat
Prepared to get the job done...........completely
Aroused and ready-my chest broad and my nipples hard
My six pack, rippling, I can read your thoughts
Your reaction, “ Oh My God!”
Arms ripped and perfectly proportioned
You revel the size of my guns
I spin to the rear, I beckon you draw near
to touch, squeeze, to feel the tightness of these deep brown
cinnamon flavored buns......
…..so ready for action. Set to be your main attraction
Your mouth drops open in shock
as you take notice of the massiveness of this rock
Long, thick and excruciatingly hard
I stand before you- veins engorged, blood rushing
My beast does throb.
Ball in satchel drawn tight, pulled close and ready
Clear, pre-cum drip from open tip as steadily.........
....I focus on your hot wet core.
My mouth drips as I think of even more
delicious and decadent ways to slay thy wanton beast
To put your wet, creamy lust at peace.
Giving your body and soul the most
surreal, erotic, deeply molecular release
(your *pucci* will warmly ebb and flow
like the ocean's white foam in summer along
a hot, sandy beach.......)
O woman, what shall you do with me?
Published 29th Mar 2012
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Like this a lot. Not that I am complaining, but the mission for the man in this poem seems to have a function a bit different from the one in Sting's song!
Is the thought here that this "specimen" is a creation of the woman in a laboratory?
Is the thought here that this "specimen" is a creation of the woman in a laboratory?
5th Apr 2012 9:11pm
very perceptive. Downright intuitive. I'd like the idea of this man being created in the mind of woman yet.......he is unaware that connection exist. It always leaves this open for extension. A little bit different than Sting's Demolition Man.
5th Apr 2012 9:31pm
Hmm well you probably already thought about this one, but you could have the creator regretting what she did, sort of like Frankenstein. Or maybe a model "ideal" man, from whom other guys learn from.
