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Gothic Submission - Rewrite
Gothic Submission
Pioneer princess of the red darkness
Whose scarlet plaits wander down scarf
While serious Russian lipstick gaze
Rises like the resurrection prophecy
Her sidelong look
Invites cowboys
To stare too long
Bridled as his bride
He gathers her desire
In his tiger web
Where her panty dungeon burns
Emancipated
By a hard-muscled plains boy
Who rolls her in his hayloft
Her Bastille under voluntary siege
To free her chained dreams
By his fiery rubber tree
Where the smolder of her fig leaf
Lays sinfully strewn
With her embers laid bare
By his brawn for her happy dawn
Where her ruby jewels of Valhalla
Are looted by his riot
On the border of her heaven
Where his burly hand turns
Into her seat sizzled Shangri-la
Pioneer princess of the red darkness
Whose scarlet plaits wander down scarf
While serious Russian lipstick gaze
Rises like the resurrection prophecy
Her sidelong look
Invites cowboys
To stare too long
Bridled as his bride
He gathers her desire
In his tiger web
Where her panty dungeon burns
Emancipated
By a hard-muscled plains boy
Who rolls her in his hayloft
Her Bastille under voluntary siege
To free her chained dreams
By his fiery rubber tree
Where the smolder of her fig leaf
Lays sinfully strewn
With her embers laid bare
By his brawn for her happy dawn
Where her ruby jewels of Valhalla
Are looted by his riot
On the border of her heaven
Where his burly hand turns
Into her seat sizzled Shangri-la
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