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Gothic Submission - Rewrite

Gothic Submission          
           
Pioneer princess of the red darkness            
Whose scarlet plaits wander down scarf            
While serious Russian lipstick gaze            
Rises like the resurrection prophecy            
Her sidelong look          
Invites cowboys          
To stare too long          
Bridled as his bride          
He gathers her desire            
In his tiger web          
Where her panty dungeon burns    
Emancipated    
By a hard-muscled plains boy       
Who rolls her in his hayloft          
Her Bastille under voluntary siege      
To free her chained dreams               
By his fiery rubber tree          
Where the smolder of her fig leaf          
Lays sinfully strewn          
With her embers laid bare          
By his brawn for her happy dawn          
Where her ruby jewels of Valhalla          
Are looted by his riot          
On the border of her heaven            
Where his burly hand turns         
Into her seat sizzled Shangri-la            
           
           
  
Written by goldenmyst
Published | Edited 8th Oct 2022
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