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even rainbows shatter…
iridescent echoes pervade
every part of my being
staining impermanence to the core
we remain fallow
as we drink diluted beliefs
of anything more
diffused reflections
awaken the truth
in the weight of what is
and always was
a mere delusion
every part of my being
staining impermanence to the core
we remain fallow
as we drink diluted beliefs
of anything more
diffused reflections
awaken the truth
in the weight of what is
and always was
a mere delusion
Published 29th Sep 2022
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29th Sep 2022 2:45pm
We pine for what we truly want whether a delusion or not...life is not always what we care so we must take each moment and let it live and breathe
29th Sep 2022 2:48pm
Dear S,
I enjoyed how wonderfully you brought to focus how human nature will yearn and take even if it’s not such a good idea to do so.
Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed how wonderfully you brought to focus how human nature will yearn and take even if it’s not such a good idea to do so.
Lovely write. H🌷
29th Sep 2022 3:27pm
a delight to savour your rich use of language Sophie...brought to mind the first of the Dhammapada...wonderful to share your creative efforts....Lawrence :)
29th Sep 2022 5:02pm
Someone once told me 'we take love where we find it.' Sod that. There have to be greater forces afoot in this mad thing we all call love. Succinct and sparse expression Soph.
29th Sep 2022 6:46pm
The title is brilliant. Absolutely.
But that frame doesn't even do justice to the content. This poem is etched in steel.
Outstanding write.
But that frame doesn't even do justice to the content. This poem is etched in steel.
Outstanding write.
30th Sep 2022 6:01am
Dear, Sophie
This is a beautifully written, poignant dose of reality.I love reading you again and writing your exhilarating, romantic, poetic name.
Brava❣🌹
This is a beautifully written, poignant dose of reality.I love reading you again and writing your exhilarating, romantic, poetic name.
Brava❣🌹
21st Oct 2022 9:37pm
