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What We Had Is Nomore
We've been together for sometime now
But my love for you is nomore
Conrolling
Insacure
No trust at all
My freedom starts now
I was weak I was blind but I see clear now
So this is my goodbye fare well goodnight
But my love for you is nomore
Conrolling
Insacure
No trust at all
My freedom starts now
I was weak I was blind but I see clear now
So this is my goodbye fare well goodnight
Published 28th Mar 2012
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1st Apr 2012 5:10pm
I never thought I would say this but this poem made me think of Madonna's "Love Don't Live Here Anymore". That is really saying something since I don't own any of her recordings!
I think there maybe some spelling errors---"Conrolling" and "Insacure".
I marvel at your ability to say so much with so few words!
I think there maybe some spelling errors---"Conrolling" and "Insacure".
I marvel at your ability to say so much with so few words!
1st Apr 2012 7:32pm
I never noticed the errors but thanks I'm glad you pointed that out doing it on my phone sometimes spelling words correct is a hassle lol
