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Inner storm
You are the catalyst
of the crave…
All mounting desires
for you…I save.
The wanton pressure
that you create…
The burning yearn only
you can sate.
You gift me reason
for heightened needs…
With flirtatious looks
and teasing deeds.
You’ve given a glimpse
of who your are…
Only causing me to
need you more.
You are perfection
in shape and form…
Creating in me
a raging storm.
One that will either
destroy this heart…
Or bring with it change
and a new start.
of the crave…
All mounting desires
for you…I save.
The wanton pressure
that you create…
The burning yearn only
you can sate.
You gift me reason
for heightened needs…
With flirtatious looks
and teasing deeds.
You’ve given a glimpse
of who your are…
Only causing me to
need you more.
You are perfection
in shape and form…
Creating in me
a raging storm.
One that will either
destroy this heart…
Or bring with it change
and a new start.
Published 3rd Sep 2022
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3rd Sep 2022 3:16pm
3rd Sep 2022 3:32pm
Storms definitely bring change
sometimes rebirth.
Thank you
for the read ,
Keith
sometimes rebirth.
Thank you
for the read ,
Keith
3rd Sep 2022 5:06pm
4th Sep 2022 10:29pm
4th Sep 2022 7:00am
Dear N,
I really enjoyed this poem. For me, there was almost a pleading quality (in a good way 😊) as the hero was trying to make his case and express love and admiration.
The last stanza was a plot twist to me. Almost like the intense focus for the desired one could be replaced by the rage of a storm by something entirely new. I like that thought. Letting go of an obsession in that manner.
I admired the formatting. It made for such a great flow and smooth read. Great write. H🌷
I really enjoyed this poem. For me, there was almost a pleading quality (in a good way 😊) as the hero was trying to make his case and express love and admiration.
The last stanza was a plot twist to me. Almost like the intense focus for the desired one could be replaced by the rage of a storm by something entirely new. I like that thought. Letting go of an obsession in that manner.
I admired the formatting. It made for such a great flow and smooth read. Great write. H🌷
4th Sep 2022 10:30pm
Thank you for your thoughtful comment.
I appreciate the time taken to read
and dissect it.
Keith
I appreciate the time taken to read
and dissect it.
Keith
25th Sep 2022 00:42am
I like the title which leads to believe that when you come to a crossroads, these kinds of storms tend to give us misdirection.
Well penned poem.
Well penned poem.
