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Re. Make
30th Aug 2022 10:53pm
Dear F,
This reads like a beautiful romantic bard of yesteryear. Yeats, Shelly, Burns. I really like the syntax, font and style of this write. The message is equally lovely. Wonderful poem. H🌷
This reads like a beautiful romantic bard of yesteryear. Yeats, Shelly, Burns. I really like the syntax, font and style of this write. The message is equally lovely. Wonderful poem. H🌷
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Re: Re. Make
1st Sep 2022 6:02pm
Dear H,
Thank you again for taking a pause to read and comment, it is appreciated and I'm honoured by the comparisons. 🙏
Thank you again for taking a pause to read and comment, it is appreciated and I'm honoured by the comparisons. 🙏
Re. Make
31st Aug 2022 3:46am
Good but all too brief poem. And I really like how you presented this. What a cool way of making it have impact. Really awesome.
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Re: Re. Make
1st Sep 2022 6:21pm
Hello Styxian,
Much in life is all to brief or maybe, just enough. Glass half full kind of thought. Thank you for reading and commenting. It sits on my wall now as a minder to give such moments, both the subject and it's verse more time in presence and creation. Maybe next time a little longer.. Appreciated 🙏
Much in life is all to brief or maybe, just enough. Glass half full kind of thought. Thank you for reading and commenting. It sits on my wall now as a minder to give such moments, both the subject and it's verse more time in presence and creation. Maybe next time a little longer.. Appreciated 🙏
Re. Make
15th Dec 2022 00:18am
I feel as if I’ve stumbled upon a treasure.
I’ve been reading your work. Exquisite.
Gorgeous write.
I’ve been reading your work. Exquisite.
Gorgeous write.
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Re: Re. Make
15th Dec 2022 00:24am
Re: Re. Make
15th Dec 2022 00:27am
You’re welcome. Waiting for your next write.
I agree that this deserves to be longer or have a follow-up.
Hope you enjoy your evening and the holidays if you celebrate.
I agree that this deserves to be longer or have a follow-up.
Hope you enjoy your evening and the holidays if you celebrate.
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Re: Re. Make
15th Dec 2022 00:48am
There is always more to share, I never quite put them all out there but shall try not to keep you waiting too long..
A follow up would be far more likely should the moment recur..
Thank you Her I will and you too
A follow up would be far more likely should the moment recur..
Thank you Her I will and you too