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Shell
what were you expecting?
someone that's understanding?
someone you can relate to?
yeah, me too
guess disappointment goes both ways
thing is we're different
most hated is those that speak truth
trusted is only a hand few
innocence and ignorance has died in me
leaving only a shell
but don't worry
that shell is no longer empty
I filled it with knowledge
strength and passion
so sorry if I can't go back
to wherever it is your at
I do understand
the life you live is your own path
it is also one with flaws
ones you need to work on
I'm not perfect
just have no need for drama
wish we could get over our differences
and move on
but words you say
have me scratching my head
how you follow and trend like a kid
willing to backstab for the littlest attention
no need is those who are fairweather
guess you were hoping for some empathy
I'm one of those strange creatures
that believes trust must be earned
and so must my feelings
someone that's understanding?
someone you can relate to?
yeah, me too
guess disappointment goes both ways
thing is we're different
most hated is those that speak truth
trusted is only a hand few
innocence and ignorance has died in me
leaving only a shell
but don't worry
that shell is no longer empty
I filled it with knowledge
strength and passion
so sorry if I can't go back
to wherever it is your at
I do understand
the life you live is your own path
it is also one with flaws
ones you need to work on
I'm not perfect
just have no need for drama
wish we could get over our differences
and move on
but words you say
have me scratching my head
how you follow and trend like a kid
willing to backstab for the littlest attention
no need is those who are fairweather
guess you were hoping for some empathy
I'm one of those strange creatures
that believes trust must be earned
and so must my feelings
Published 29th Aug 2022
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29th Aug 2022 12:25pm
We must be on similar wavelengths, DC... I just recently wrote a senryś titled Fairweather, so I can fully wrap my head around this piece!
I am far from perfect but once trust is broken, to me that's a deal breaker. I will abide a lot but when I've been betrayed, well, it's almost impossible to put that toothpaste back in the tube.... This piece ticks a lot of boxes of truth, ☑ personal preferences and also uplifts with the importance of bettering ones own self, too.
I felt it...enormously.
Nicely done, my friend
🌹-B
I am far from perfect but once trust is broken, to me that's a deal breaker. I will abide a lot but when I've been betrayed, well, it's almost impossible to put that toothpaste back in the tube.... This piece ticks a lot of boxes of truth, ☑ personal preferences and also uplifts with the importance of bettering ones own self, too.
I felt it...enormously.
Nicely done, my friend
🌹-B
30th Aug 2022 7:20am
For sure. Sometimes I feel like I have to hold on to people even when it's clear they are not what they were, or maybe I am not what I was. It's like to me ether be all in or not at all. I rather have few friends than ones that are really just wasting my time.
it's always wonderful to see your comments friend. Thanks for stopping by 😁
it's always wonderful to see your comments friend. Thanks for stopping by 😁
17th Sep 2022 1:23am
This alone says relatively everything:
🔥 I'm one of those strange creatures
that believes trust must be earned
and so must my feelings,🔥
🔥 I'm one of those strange creatures
that believes trust must be earned
and so must my feelings,🔥
17th Sep 2022 2:29am
Some people will use and abuse if you let them.
Thank you very much for the comment 😁
It is very much appreciated.
Thank you very much for the comment 😁
It is very much appreciated.
17th Sep 2022 3:55am
