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We Said Yes
Published 28th Aug 2022
Author's Note
I wrote this for my daughter after watching her recent breakup with a lover. I blurred her photo to make this picture poem. She is beautiful inside and out.
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28th Aug 2022 4:16pm
Daughter and mother are both beautiful. Your tribute to her life event is touching.
28th Aug 2022 4:57pm
28th Aug 2022 7:59pm
A bitter-sweet write, conveys the disillusion of breakup. Feel the pain. Favourite lines:
Using only these
parts carried since birth,
ripened to an unexpected sweetness.
Using only these
parts carried since birth,
ripened to an unexpected sweetness.
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7th Sep 2022 1:10pm
Not as special as your combined skills of writer, parent...and I suspect more talents, as yet unknown. Thank you again- Ted
