We Said Yes

Daughter and mother are both beautiful. Your tribute to her life event is touching.

that was sweet of you t feel your daughters hurt and help with the pain

A bitter-sweet write, conveys the disillusion of breakup. Feel the pain. Favourite lines:

Using only these
parts carried since birth,
ripened to an unexpected sweetness.

You got to believe you can't believe in a guarantee.  Keep on writing.

...slipping away from what?

Thank you for that. And, I love your name.

Ah, warrior poet, is a sexy combination.