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i hate it
i hate it when every thing you do
is fake. . . .
i hate it when you think
im crazy. . . .
i hate it when you try to make me stop
cutting my self. . . .
i hate it when you try to
calm me down. . . .
i hate it when evey thing you do can
never help me. . . .
i hate it how im in love with you
when i hate you. you make
me wanna die all because of ive been dieing
on the in and dieing on the out can never help me see a lie
is fake. . . .
i hate it when you think
im crazy. . . .
i hate it when you try to make me stop
cutting my self. . . .
i hate it when you try to
calm me down. . . .
i hate it when evey thing you do can
never help me. . . .
i hate it how im in love with you
when i hate you. you make
me wanna die all because of ive been dieing
on the in and dieing on the out can never help me see a lie
Published 3rd Feb 2010
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3rd Feb 2010 2:58am
Just as I said in the other comment, i understand how you are feeling, and you couldnt of said it better.
Just one slight problem with this, is that i think you meant dying on the inside and dyinging on the outside, if you changed it to that i think it is a great poem :)
Just one slight problem with this, is that i think you meant dying on the inside and dyinging on the outside, if you changed it to that i think it is a great poem :)
