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cause of you
Am i out of my mind?
Or have i gone psycho?
Yet i think i would care about what you say
Cause what you say is true
I cut myself
I go crazy
I'm scary
And yet im so very depressed
But people dont know why
They dont think about what they say
Because they're the ones that make me do this
It's like I have to put on show just to keep there minds reeling
It's never gonna end
Or have i gone psycho?
Yet i think i would care about what you say
Cause what you say is true
I cut myself
I go crazy
I'm scary
And yet im so very depressed
But people dont know why
They dont think about what they say
Because they're the ones that make me do this
It's like I have to put on show just to keep there minds reeling
It's never gonna end
Published 3rd Feb 2010
| Edited 30th Jul 2011
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3rd Feb 2010 2:30am
yet so very true, you are right, we are alike, extremely, it's like you stole those thoughts out of my mind, and wrote them down... Good piece though, it says what we all think deep down inside well and catches the readers attention, good piece hun
3rd Feb 2010 2:42am
18th Jul 2011 1:39pm
Shall we look at how many times the writer seems to be craving for pity? This distinctive approach at listing heartbreak memorabilia is something I'm getting used to seeing, but that doesn't make it okay. And then, there's the typos!
20th Jul 2011 6:34pm
Not much substance to this one. It reads like a journal entry quite honestly. Plus, as mentioned, it's littered with spelling mistakes and/or typos.
22nd Jul 2011 4:05pm
I was kinda new when I wrote this and didn't know much about poetry and I haven't been able to fix the typos
22nd Jul 2011 4:05pm
I was kinda new when I wrote this and didn't know much about poetry and I haven't been able to fix the typos
27th Jul 2011 5:06pm
