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I've Got A Crush On You
1
You positively mesmerize.
You’re positively fine.
Any wonder I have a crush on you?
I think of you all the time.
Because you are so beautiful.
Because your heart is kind.
You’re always floating in my thoughts.
A sweet spirit on my mind.
Chorus
Yes, I’ve got a crush on you
Is there nothing else I can do?
I’ll cherish each thought that comes my way
'Cause each thought I think is you.
2
You’re cool and kind of quirky.
Kinda wild and playful too.
Even the stars shining up above know
I’m deeply in love with you!
You positively mesmerize.
Please tell me what I need to do!
I'm living my life with this crush inside
Just because you’re simply you.
Chorus
Baby, I’ve got a crush on you.
Is there nothing else I can do?
I’ll cherish each thought that comes my way
'Cause every thought I think is you.
3
Your flowing hair, your fingertips,
The way you touch my hand.
My words are wrong but when you hear my song,
Your smile says you understand.
Each night we lie in a loving bed
And thank the starry nights
For love that mesmerizes still
And takes us to new heights.
Chorus
Baby, I’ve got a crush on you.
Is there nothing else I can do?
I’ll cherish each thought that comes my way
'Cause every thought I think is you.
You positively mesmerize.
You’re positively fine.
Any wonder I have a crush on you?
I think of you all the time.
Because you are so beautiful.
Because your heart is kind.
You’re always floating in my thoughts.
A sweet spirit on my mind.
Chorus
Yes, I’ve got a crush on you
Is there nothing else I can do?
I’ll cherish each thought that comes my way
'Cause each thought I think is you.
2
You’re cool and kind of quirky.
Kinda wild and playful too.
Even the stars shining up above know
I’m deeply in love with you!
You positively mesmerize.
Please tell me what I need to do!
I'm living my life with this crush inside
Just because you’re simply you.
Chorus
Baby, I’ve got a crush on you.
Is there nothing else I can do?
I’ll cherish each thought that comes my way
'Cause every thought I think is you.
3
Your flowing hair, your fingertips,
The way you touch my hand.
My words are wrong but when you hear my song,
Your smile says you understand.
Each night we lie in a loving bed
And thank the starry nights
For love that mesmerizes still
And takes us to new heights.
Chorus
Baby, I’ve got a crush on you.
Is there nothing else I can do?
I’ll cherish each thought that comes my way
'Cause every thought I think is you.
Published 13th Aug 2022
| Edited 21st Aug 2022
Author's Note
A song draft based on the poem, Positively Mesmerizing by poet, faithmairee. I'll toss it back to faithmairee for more edits/input. It is in the simple and sweet style of John Prine.
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13th Aug 2022 8:44pm
What sweet lyrics. Definitely would love to hear this finished with accompaniment. 🎶
Wow! This is beyond beautiful! I'm going in for a second read but honestly I don't see where my input could make it any better at all. I really love it!
In line six did you mean your heart and not you're heart? The part about the children knowing is a little strange in my opinion but there's nothing wrong with it. Maybe you could think of something different like even the stars in the night sky know. It's just an idea. I think something different might work a little better. Everything else is great.
In line six did you mean your heart and not you're heart? The part about the children knowing is a little strange in my opinion but there's nothing wrong with it. Maybe you could think of something different like even the stars in the night sky know. It's just an idea. I think something different might work a little better. Everything else is great.
14th Aug 2022 11:21am
Oh my, that you're/your thing is one of my own pet peeves and there it was in my own writing. Thank you for catching it.
I agree with the stars idea. Anything else that comes to mind will only make it better. Wonder if this is how it's done in Nashville?
I agree with the stars idea. Anything else that comes to mind will only make it better. Wonder if this is how it's done in Nashville?
14th Aug 2022 12:43pm
You are more than welcome! I don't know about the songwriters in Nashville but I definitely think we have something good going on.
14th Aug 2022 00:40am
