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STIRRED UP POOL
Lying outspread
upon the bed,
her trim V-patch
framed her wet snatch.
'Twixt legs apart.
so like a heart
appeared those lips,
flushed like rosehips.
What he'd worked up,
he took a sup,
his tongue circling
the opening.
And then he drew
himself into
those opened lips
between her hips.
Her stirred-up pool
welcomed his tool
for her delight
that wedding night.
upon the bed,
her trim V-patch
framed her wet snatch.
'Twixt legs apart.
so like a heart
appeared those lips,
flushed like rosehips.
What he'd worked up,
he took a sup,
his tongue circling
the opening.
And then he drew
himself into
those opened lips
between her hips.
Her stirred-up pool
welcomed his tool
for her delight
that wedding night.
Published 13th Aug 2022
Author's Note
The poem and title grew out of its last verse, rather than the first. Inspired by Goldenyst's 'Consummation of a Marriage - Female POV, in particular these lines:
All is fluid motion of flame
Swirling in sea of molten lava
Flesh melding into flesh
All is fluid motion of flame
Swirling in sea of molten lava
Flesh melding into flesh
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13th Aug 2022 12:17pm
Gorgeously sensual. Loved the beauty with which you wrote the imagery. The rhyming is done to perfection. Finely crafted erotica my friend.
John
John
Enjoyed the write and loved the rhyme. Only one question was the water warm?
-~NE~
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14th Aug 2022 2:13am
I love when your creativity is heighted by words in passing by others, those are always your most beautiful gems you tend to stain your canvas with, and this poetic musing is no exception, to understand your mindset I had to read, Poet Goldenmyst's poem..
A very nice afterthought if I must say, my wise poet
Enjoy your early morning in the UK and may you have a blessed Sunday
A very nice afterthought if I must say, my wise poet
Enjoy your early morning in the UK and may you have a blessed Sunday
Anonymous
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