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a lit window
so much is meant to certain eyes
by a lit window in the night
passed by and maybe wedged between
two walls
it is like a capsule of beauty and life
floating across space
and passing by you’re just
a drifting star unseen
by astronauts and computers
but how you long to be
by a lit window in the night
passed by and maybe wedged between
two walls
it is like a capsule of beauty and life
floating across space
and passing by you’re just
a drifting star unseen
by astronauts and computers
but how you long to be
Published 12th Aug 2022
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Anonymous
13th Aug 2022 1:50pm
There is universal sorrow attached to a lit window.
"and passing by you’re just
a drifting star unseen
by astronauts and computers"
These are the kind of lines I wish I'd written. Stokes that part of my soul, which seems forever, lost.
"and passing by you’re just
a drifting star unseen
by astronauts and computers"
These are the kind of lines I wish I'd written. Stokes that part of my soul, which seems forever, lost.
13th Aug 2022 9:14pm
Thank you, Rob, I’m really glad that section moved you in the way that it did.
