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Fine
“I’m fine” she said
Even though you knew
she was tired,
For all she ever wanted was
to be desired.
Even though you knew
she was tired,
For all she ever wanted was
to be desired.
Published 2nd Aug 2022
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14th Aug 2022 10:17am
The longing for that feeling can be quite draining especially if you are not seen by the other person as such. Most of us have have had those sleepless nights just wondering and just wondering why?
Not sure if that’s what the write was about but we each see our own experiences in other words.
~NE~
Not sure if that’s what the write was about but we each see our own experiences in other words.
~NE~
16th Aug 2022 8:07pm
Yeah that is what the write is about, it’s lovely to see that my words are being interpreted the way I intended them to be when I wrote this, thank you for you comment.
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