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Almost
you and I
were just an almost
time and time again
I begged
the world to stop
so for once
even just a moment
we could be
so much more
than a possibility
more than
just an almost
were just an almost
time and time again
I begged
the world to stop
so for once
even just a moment
we could be
so much more
than a possibility
more than
just an almost
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Re. Almost
25th Jul 2022 7:31pm
Re: Re. Almost
25th Jul 2022 7:49pm
Re. Almost
nicely written.
almost can disappoint...
let me know when you figure out how to get the world to stop.
almost can disappoint...
let me know when you figure out how to get the world to stop.
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Re: Re. Almost
26th Jul 2022 9:50pm
Anonymous
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26th Jul 2022 00:02am
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Re: Re. Almost
29th Jul 2022 2:28pm
Re. Almost
Ms. Journey,
This piece is so simple put and astounding as well! A face to face luv letter speak like is this agreeance of thy heart's ah speak. A flower from thy field that captivates even, if couldn't be liked by the one spoken too. 💣🍭🍑🍫💋🍑🚬🚿🛁🛳️🏙️
This piece is so simple put and astounding as well! A face to face luv letter speak like is this agreeance of thy heart's ah speak. A flower from thy field that captivates even, if couldn't be liked by the one spoken too. 💣🍭🍑🍫💋🍑🚬🚿🛁🛳️🏙️
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Re: Re. Almost
26th Jul 2022 9:51pm
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27th Jul 2022 00:09am
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
26th Jul 2022 11:08am
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27th Jul 2022 00:15am
Re. Almost
26th Jul 2022 5:47pm
That almost keeps the wonder alive.
If almost became a was, the memory could become a faux pas!
If almost became a was, the memory could become a faux pas!
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Re: Re. Almost
26th Jul 2022 9:52pm
Re. Almost
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26th Jul 2022 8:14pm
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Re: Re. Almost
26th Jul 2022 9:55pm
Yes, I suppose you're right. I think we've all been an almost a time or two.
Thank you so much ❤ you're so kind
JC
Thank you so much ❤ you're so kind
JC
Re. Almost
29th Jul 2022 3:01am
Excellent. The "just an almost" is a powerful phrase to work with. And you did, quite well. Well done, Journey.
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29th Jul 2022 2:29pm