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My confession
there is something
about the sound
of the ocean
that makes me
want to forget
the world
lay on my bed
and confess
my sins to you
about the sound
of the ocean
that makes me
want to forget
the world
lay on my bed
and confess
my sins to you
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Re. My confession
Anonymous
24th Jul 2022 6:00pm
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Re: Re. My confession
24th Jul 2022 6:03pm
Re. My confession
I can see it. The mood created for opening up and divulging what wants to flow out of the brain. The ocean does such things to us.
This is good stuff.
This is good stuff.
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25th Jul 2022 5:43pm
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26th Jul 2022 2:55pm
I like this because I like good writing. It is well written and has a great message within it.
It isn't overly done. And it isn't fluffy.
It's what poetry actually is.
It isn't overly done. And it isn't fluffy.
It's what poetry actually is.
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Re. My confession
25th Jul 2022 5:28am
Dear JC,
Can’t say as I want to confess my sins, that would take too long but the sound of the ocean definitely makes me want to lay on my bed and be transported to another world. I truly enjoyed the message behind your poem. Trusting someone enough to bare your soul is such a gift. H🌷
Can’t say as I want to confess my sins, that would take too long but the sound of the ocean definitely makes me want to lay on my bed and be transported to another world. I truly enjoyed the message behind your poem. Trusting someone enough to bare your soul is such a gift. H🌷
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Re: Re. My confession
25th Jul 2022 5:45pm
H,
Trusting someone enough to bear one's soul is the best kind of love and trust and it's so rare.
I appreciate your sweet comments always
Trusting someone enough to bear one's soul is the best kind of love and trust and it's so rare.
I appreciate your sweet comments always
Anonymous
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25th Jul 2022 7:13am
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Re. My confession
16th Aug 2022 5:36pm
dear Journey
a fine portrait of the depth of vulnerability unveiled through authenticity
a warm smile
silent lotus
a fine portrait of the depth of vulnerability unveiled through authenticity
a warm smile
silent lotus
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16th Aug 2022 5:51pm