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why do you care
why do you care if nobody else does
why should you care if even i dont
you shouldn't care about me
but yet you still do
why do you care if everyone else gave up
why do you care if nobody else does
why should you care if even i dont
you shouldn't care about me
but yet you still do
why do you care if everyone else gave up
why do you care if nobody else does
Published 21st Mar 2012
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21st Mar 2012 3:52pm
the answer is just 'because'.
This is simple and concise but in only 6 lines it conveys a lot: defiance, hope, anger, and bone-deep hurt. Good job!
This is simple and concise but in only 6 lines it conveys a lot: defiance, hope, anger, and bone-deep hurt. Good job!
21st Mar 2012 7:09pm
