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Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
It played out
In plain view
For all to see
The way you
Love me is
A wonderful thing
You claim it
Happened even
Before we met
You knew you
Loved me
And always did
I was surprised
To hear that you
Have already made
Plans for us
I felt for you
An immediate trust
The bottom line
Is simple and sweet
I love your
Loving me
a r d e n t l y
In plain view
For all to see
The way you
Love me is
A wonderful thing
You claim it
Happened even
Before we met
You knew you
Loved me
And always did
I was surprised
To hear that you
Have already made
Plans for us
I felt for you
An immediate trust
The bottom line
Is simple and sweet
I love your
Loving me
a r d e n t l y
Written by
faithmairee
(Faith Elizabeth Brigham)
Published 2nd Jul 2022
| Edited 19th Aug 2022
Author's Note
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reading list entries 2
comments 17
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Re. Loving Me
2nd Jul 2022 10:11am
Hoi hoi FaithM.,
A poem of beauty is a joy forever.
Leave it up to me to murder your language.
Lovely to see you at work with pen or keyboard again.
I’ll raise the flag and sound the trumpet!
Kind regards, Gus
A poem of beauty is a joy forever.
Leave it up to me to murder your language.
Lovely to see you at work with pen or keyboard again.
I’ll raise the flag and sound the trumpet!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Loving Me
2nd Jul 2022 11:05am
Hi, Gus! You're so kind to me! Thank you! Yes, it is great to be writing again. It always soothes my soul! I'm glad you enjoyed my latest poem! It's great hearing from you.
Just me
Faith
Just me
Faith
Re. Loving Me
2nd Jul 2022 11:58am
Re: Re. Loving Me
2nd Jul 2022 3:53pm
I actually dreamed this last night! I felt so good after waking up, I turned it into a poem. Thank you so much for reading and responding to my poem. I appreciate it!
Re. Loving Me
2nd Jul 2022 1:17pm
Re: Re. Loving Me
2nd Jul 2022 3:54pm
Re. Loving Me
Hoi hoi all you DUP’ers
Hope this finds you well.
After the lady’s OK, I put these wonderful words to music.
The final mix can be made as soon as I have a monitor again, as mine is in the repair shop at the moment.
Tickets can be ordered @faithm’s. Our aim is to make her filthy rich.
Alas, a little more patience is needed.
End of update!
Kind regards, Gus
Hope this finds you well.
After the lady’s OK, I put these wonderful words to music.
The final mix can be made as soon as I have a monitor again, as mine is in the repair shop at the moment.
Tickets can be ordered @faithm’s. Our aim is to make her filthy rich.
Alas, a little more patience is needed.
End of update!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
24th Dec 2022 6:48am
Hoi hoi
I’m afraid this one must be the last update on how the song with your lyrics is doing.
The smallest of the two forums I published the song, disabled the counter, so no reliable progress can be recorded from now.
At this day, the amount of reads and listens is
Gitaarnet.nl 3,334
Songwriters in the kitchen 1,455
This amounts to 4,789 reads and listens.
I feel privileged having had the chance to cooperate with you in writing and recording this song.
I thank you for this.
And wish you a very nice and meaningful Christmas and a very happy 2023!
Kind regards, Gus
I’m afraid this one must be the last update on how the song with your lyrics is doing.
The smallest of the two forums I published the song, disabled the counter, so no reliable progress can be recorded from now.
At this day, the amount of reads and listens is
Gitaarnet.nl 3,334
Songwriters in the kitchen 1,455
This amounts to 4,789 reads and listens.
I feel privileged having had the chance to cooperate with you in writing and recording this song.
I thank you for this.
And wish you a very nice and meaningful Christmas and a very happy 2023!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
25th Dec 2022 8:34am
Thank you, Gus. Here's wishing you the best holiday season ever. Have you any idea why the counter would be disabled? It doesn't wake much sense to me at all.
Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
30th Mar 2024 9:26am
Hoi hoi Faith
Glad you’re back. I hope this finds you well.
Searching for something else, I came across the count of ‘Loving me’.
Together with an estimated 2,500 listens on Songwriters in the Kitchen (an international forum which no longer exists), your poem brought happiness to the eyes, ears and hearts of some 10,900 people in the Netherlands and abroad.
I hope this lifts you up further and I’ll leave a message on your loving me post.
I wish you a beautiful, meaningful Easter.
Kind regards, Gus
Glad you’re back. I hope this finds you well.
Searching for something else, I came across the count of ‘Loving me’.
Together with an estimated 2,500 listens on Songwriters in the Kitchen (an international forum which no longer exists), your poem brought happiness to the eyes, ears and hearts of some 10,900 people in the Netherlands and abroad.
I hope this lifts you up further and I’ll leave a message on your loving me post.
I wish you a beautiful, meaningful Easter.
Kind regards, Gus
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Re: Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
Hello, there! It was wonderful hearing from you! I was thrilled to find our song was heard by so many people. It was so exciting to get it recorded and I thank you for doing it! It was fun wasn't it?
Maybe, we could do it again sometime.
A very Happy Easter to you as well!
Your friend,
Faith
Maybe, we could do it again sometime.
A very Happy Easter to you as well!
Your friend,
Faith
Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
31st Mar 2024 10:34pm
Great piece. I know the feeling it’s nothing easy to put into words, you’ve done a great job!
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Re: Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
31st Mar 2024 11:01pm
Thank you so much for such a a wonderful response to our song collaboration. We appreciate it
Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
31st Mar 2024 11:53pm
is a heartfelt collaboration that beautifully expresses the joy and surprise of discovering love.
your poem highlights the openness and vulnerability between you and your partner, as you acknowledge the immediate trust and connection that blossomed. your simplicity and sweetness of the bottom line, "I love your loving me ardently," encapsulate the depth of affection and appreciation shared between you. It's a celebration of love's power and the beauty of being loved in return. lovely love writing.
your poem highlights the openness and vulnerability between you and your partner, as you acknowledge the immediate trust and connection that blossomed. your simplicity and sweetness of the bottom line, "I love your loving me ardently," encapsulate the depth of affection and appreciation shared between you. It's a celebration of love's power and the beauty of being loved in return. lovely love writing.
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Re. Loving Me (Song Collaboration With Jilted Johnny)
15th Apr 2024 4:16am