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I passed on dessert
I can see
something
that empties
my diaphragm
and not order
from the
menu.
Just because
I want it
in me
doesn’t mean
I want to deal
with the
consequences.
Published 1st Jul 2022
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1st Jul 2022 4:34pm
Just because
I want it
in me
doesn’t mean
I want to deal
with the
consequences.
Regardless of the content, the metrics of this has its own universality.
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I think it's the diminishing drum beat....
Listening to the heart of it as sound....
Also....this is that very human moment of our questioning our own inner guidance. Nothing spells human being like self-control and attaining a moment of self-discipline.
So, both in structure and in content, the context has that exit point in narrative theory that questions evolution. Discrimatory faculties ask whether animals will become more than they were. You pack a big punch in a small space. This is fine wood working.
I want it
in me
doesn’t mean
I want to deal
with the
consequences.
Regardless of the content, the metrics of this has its own universality.
3
3
2
I think it's the diminishing drum beat....
Listening to the heart of it as sound....
Also....this is that very human moment of our questioning our own inner guidance. Nothing spells human being like self-control and attaining a moment of self-discipline.
So, both in structure and in content, the context has that exit point in narrative theory that questions evolution. Discrimatory faculties ask whether animals will become more than they were. You pack a big punch in a small space. This is fine wood working.
2nd Jul 2022 6:27pm
You mad genius, you, turtle, that is a badass review, and I'm super appreciative of it.
3rd Jul 2022 10:52am
Anonymous
1st Jul 2022 8:17pm
Runners discipline.
Turtle said it better
Turtle said it better
2nd Jul 2022 6:27pm
Runners aren't disciplined, we just take one more step until we're too far away.
4th Jul 2022 9:50am
Dear B,
First read through I thought of the triple chocolate cake I passed on. Second read through I thought of him. What might have been and glad it wasn’t. The desire was better than the reality in the end. So very much to appreciate in your writings. H🌷
First read through I thought of the triple chocolate cake I passed on. Second read through I thought of him. What might have been and glad it wasn’t. The desire was better than the reality in the end. So very much to appreciate in your writings. H🌷
4th Jul 2022 1:54pm
Why does shit that's so delicious always end up bad for you?!?!?!?!
Appreciate your reads, Hon.
Appreciate your reads, Hon.
