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How green, how green was my valley?
Lush golden
Before the takers trod through
Daisy's forming chains
Singing merrily merrily
Hummingbirds sipping from buttercups
A gentle breeze seldom disturbs daffodils
Morning dew drops scent lingers
Butterflies boldly boasting who can steal the most kisses
Sunflowers standing attendance as far as eye can see
Glorious sunburst hues
Reds
Orange
Pink
As the wild roses pray, behold eden
Pernicious noxious smog encircling horizons
Putrid stained pox marking once fertile ground
The singed metallic stench
of rotting iron corpses permeates
Before the takers trod through
Daisy's forming chains
Singing merrily merrily
Hummingbirds sipping from buttercups
A gentle breeze seldom disturbs daffodils
Morning dew drops scent lingers
Butterflies boldly boasting who can steal the most kisses
Sunflowers standing attendance as far as eye can see
Glorious sunburst hues
Reds
Orange
Pink
As the wild roses pray, behold eden
Pernicious noxious smog encircling horizons
Putrid stained pox marking once fertile ground
The singed metallic stench
of rotting iron corpses permeates
Published 20th Jun 2022
| Edited 21st Jun 2022
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- Edited 20th Jun 2022 10:01pm
20th Jun 2022 9:33pm
It's all historical dynamics to me. How can it not be so fucking obvious?
I was talking to some friends behind the counter at a coffee bar, the topic of mundane conversation was about how hot it was.
Yeah, I said, but you can't blame the sun. Sun didn't cause global warming. It was man that did that! Dude at a table nearby, had been getting real fidgety over my not directing any body language or male gaze his way a minute before when "his girlfriend," (Oh! I mean, Excuse me! I didn't realize, sir) was fair obviously looking at me, and instead kept them both in the peripheral cause I just didn wanna deal with this guy and what were so obviously, ahead of time, his guy expectations? He fucking visibly flinched as soon as the high note of that came out of my mouth. Are we all playing so fucking falsetto, here, brah?
It's the end of the empire the Veda's were written about, more than 17,000 years ago. Only, it's going to be schortchig instead of freezing. Who knows, though. Maybe we'll be able to hold a sun iteration of our actual tech better than they were able to, and there it won't actually be bedtime for humanity's techno-futuro dreams. By all accounts, and of course , that's super spotty , but still , our tech is a lot more democratized, and utilized by masses of all the masses, rather than just a few esteemed honored viminas riding around white just their airified, rairified bhramans, super death beaming the heck out of each other and their population masses interspersed with ceremonial displays of raiment clad elephant ridings to stoke even further their majesties before the terrified peasentries. I mean, it's early days yet of our climate changes, so, ya never know. Myself? I practice kicking it, my hope up front and center. Listen to the kids. Know which way's up so i can shuttle it forward to them. That's all i always done been do, IRL, where the shit is real
That is a really good song there too. Lana's my girl. But We've never met.
Barbara / Shaw Industries 800 486 9330. Payment. Sick of Sittin'
https://youtu.be/CqWRzkB4ME8
I was talking to some friends behind the counter at a coffee bar, the topic of mundane conversation was about how hot it was.
Yeah, I said, but you can't blame the sun. Sun didn't cause global warming. It was man that did that! Dude at a table nearby, had been getting real fidgety over my not directing any body language or male gaze his way a minute before when "his girlfriend," (Oh! I mean, Excuse me! I didn't realize, sir) was fair obviously looking at me, and instead kept them both in the peripheral cause I just didn wanna deal with this guy and what were so obviously, ahead of time, his guy expectations? He fucking visibly flinched as soon as the high note of that came out of my mouth. Are we all playing so fucking falsetto, here, brah?
It's the end of the empire the Veda's were written about, more than 17,000 years ago. Only, it's going to be schortchig instead of freezing. Who knows, though. Maybe we'll be able to hold a sun iteration of our actual tech better than they were able to, and there it won't actually be bedtime for humanity's techno-futuro dreams. By all accounts, and of course , that's super spotty , but still , our tech is a lot more democratized, and utilized by masses of all the masses, rather than just a few esteemed honored viminas riding around white just their airified, rairified bhramans, super death beaming the heck out of each other and their population masses interspersed with ceremonial displays of raiment clad elephant ridings to stoke even further their majesties before the terrified peasentries. I mean, it's early days yet of our climate changes, so, ya never know. Myself? I practice kicking it, my hope up front and center. Listen to the kids. Know which way's up so i can shuttle it forward to them. That's all i always done been do, IRL, where the shit is real
That is a really good song there too. Lana's my girl. But We've never met.
Barbara / Shaw Industries 800 486 9330. Payment. Sick of Sittin'
https://youtu.be/CqWRzkB4ME8
21st Jun 2022 5:04pm
I was worried you’d gotten cheerful or something and started writing pastoral odes and shit. The I was going to have to be the asshat who was like, “you can’t read flitty little delicate images without a little delight in your inflection.”
Then the end rolls up and I’m like… yep. There it is.
Good write, friend, and good reading
Then the end rolls up and I’m like… yep. There it is.
Good write, friend, and good reading
Anonymous
31st Jul 2022 1:23pm
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