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Me And Jack Daniels
Just me and Jack Daniels
tasting its venom
with a Marlboro
running away with the devil
a dark romance shattered
with a peckerwood itch
Jack Daniels with a-beer-back
taking a little sip, taking a little sip
itching for your hips
of a past tense poet
feeling ambiguous
just me and Jack Daniels
tasting its venom
with a Marlboro
running away with the devil
a dark romance shattered
with a peckerwood itch
Jack Daniels with a-beer-back
taking a little sip, taking a little sip
itching for your hips
of a past tense poet
feeling ambiguous
just me and Jack Daniels
Published 17th Jun 2022
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17th Jun 2022 4:14am
Dear A,
I understand the constant ache of loss. For me it’s a torment. The poem is an outstanding insight to that pain. H🌷
I understand the constant ache of loss. For me it’s a torment. The poem is an outstanding insight to that pain. H🌷
17th Jun 2022 12:59pm
17th Jun 2022 4:33am
hello dearest Adagio I'm feeling this
it's bittersweet with Jack and your need ❤️
it's bittersweet with Jack and your need ❤️
17th Jun 2022 12:59pm
