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Ghost Pipes
With ghost pipes in the mist
among the mountain laurel
dimmer than the hypothesis
of twilight's veil
in my random hyperbole
when time comes
to the call of your destiny
with half, its tongue in the dark
among the mountain laurel
with ghost pipes in the mist
among the mountain laurel
dimmer than the hypothesis
of twilight's veil
in my random hyperbole
when time comes
to the call of your destiny
with half, its tongue in the dark
among the mountain laurel
with ghost pipes in the mist
Published 16th Jun 2022
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17th Jun 2022 9:05pm
Really enjoyed the rhythm of this piece,
and having been amongst them in the woods myself, I'm drawn in by the visual description as well.
'dimmer than the hypothesis
of twilight's veil,'
Nicely done
and having been amongst them in the woods myself, I'm drawn in by the visual description as well.
'dimmer than the hypothesis
of twilight's veil,'
Nicely done
17th Jun 2022 9:19pm
