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Love...?
I dont love you any less
Than I did before...
You deserve best
But my love grows more and more...
Im not perfect for you
You are for me
My love is a dew
Cant you see?
Without you...
There is no me...
You have no clue...
Dont you agree...?
Than I did before...
You deserve best
But my love grows more and more...
Im not perfect for you
You are for me
My love is a dew
Cant you see?
Without you...
There is no me...
You have no clue...
Dont you agree...?
Published 18th Mar 2012
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18th Mar 2012 5:17pm
18th Mar 2012 5:18pm
19th Mar 2012 1:50am
This is really good! It kind of reminds me of my own style of writing although I don't use structure/rhyming very much anymore. I liked your poem a lot though (:
19th Mar 2012 2:17am
Thank you! Lately, I dont even think when i write. I just sit and let it pour out of me. Soooooo I was afraid it was going to turn out horrible. Haha
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