Quiescence

Wow . I am speechless. The concept develops in such an unexpected way!
There is a pre-taste created purely visually that prepares you for the following and it overlapses in the further philosophy in a natural and smooth way.
Also, I marvel at the way you are capable to create a visual combined with a narrative and a notion with a deeper meaning.
I previously said that you are the best author here, now I'm starting to think you're my best author ever, and that's a compliment now, Isn't it. :D

You are too kind, AND charming! But I cannot take all the credit since much of the way the poem develops is baked into the traditional structure of the Sonnet form invented all those centuries ago in Sicily, or so I have read. I became a fan of the form about ten years back and even more so with some recent readings of Shakespeare. The more you work with it the better you get, and the more rewarding as well. I love it! Heavens perfect paragraph!

True that. Learning from the past authors does have an impact to be mentioned. They should be accredited accordingly. I am not a native English speaker, by the way. Makes it more interesting for me to try to write in English.

Speaking of Sicily, I also know Italian as a foreign language.

That's interesting. In time you will have advantage over native speakers by being able to compare and contrast the modes of syntax.

Oh bravo! That's perfect for renaissance studies! You are an absolute linguistic tigress!

Yes.. that's perfect but lately, it seems my reading enthusiasm is too muchy, overbearing even, if not impossible, to be quite honest. I bought so many books that I'm dying to read (mostly philosophical and not really poetry), that I'm literally buried underneath paperwork. So yeah, It's a mission impossible of literature queue.  
Lately, I've been focused on poetry but I definitely need to check out more Italian one.  
Also, for some reason I love to read the Bulgarian translations (sorry, I'm biased with our Cyrillic alphabet) and sometimes it feels I study how to write English poetry all by myself, just by accumulating experience. LOL.  
PS. Also, it is an interesting phenomenon that, when I write in English, I feel how I make some mistakes but I just want to finish the sentence and ... yep, I never think twice! With poetry, it just arranges itself more easily. Who knows???

I can't even imagine attempting poetry in another language so my hat is off to you for that, but yes, you need to take a break from the books now and then to preserve your spirit. I accumulated quite the personal library because by the time I am not even halfway into a book my interests have already gotten hooked on something else. Cut yourself some slack and don't forget to live a little. Those books will be waiting for you when you are ready!