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idle time.
it’s the weekends
that hurt the most;
idle time can be so destructive,
when used in such a foul way.
the mind seems to go
where it is least wanted
and thoughts start to create
their own form of loneliness,
stripping away
at each layer of sanity.
losing a love
is the master of all pain,
and reliving the words
on those long weekends,
can be so very insane.
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byron gates jr
that hurt the most;
idle time can be so destructive,
when used in such a foul way.
the mind seems to go
where it is least wanted
and thoughts start to create
their own form of loneliness,
stripping away
at each layer of sanity.
losing a love
is the master of all pain,
and reliving the words
on those long weekends,
can be so very insane.
[i]_[/i]_[i]_[/i]_
byron gates jr
Published 31st Jan 2010
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31st Jan 2010 3:13pm
It feels like this poem has read my mind. I like the poem, its simple and to the point.
31st Jan 2010 4:05pm
Omg its freaky but this is how I have been feeling lately and I couldn't have said it in a better way!
Weekends can be so destructive for me!
And the last verse..it is so true!!!
Weekends can be so destructive for me!
And the last verse..it is so true!!!
12th Feb 2013 3:43am
