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pennydreadful
steal a penny from
a dead mans
eyes
penny dreadful
a penny saved
has found
God
-but not before-
time runs like
shit through
a goose
a blank space
in a dark room
filled with
holes
where do we
go?
a penny for
your
thoughts?
Published 9th Apr 2022
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9th Apr 2022 10:04am
"a blank space
in a dark room
filled with
holes "
indeed BK....where do we go from here !
loved the apathy staring at us all...right where the holes exist !!
much more and then..some more for our "pennymistic" hopes :)
in a dark room
filled with
holes "
indeed BK....where do we go from here !
loved the apathy staring at us all...right where the holes exist !!
much more and then..some more for our "pennymistic" hopes :)
9th Apr 2022 12:38pm
Thank you for recognizing the apathy present in this piece, to_be_me. Very much appreciated.
hugs,
buddhakitty
hugs,
buddhakitty
6th Jun 2022 9:45pm
I enjoyed the play on words here, the myth and metaphor. Mysterious writings always leave us wanting to know more.
25th Jun 2022 3:34am
I'm afraid there is nothing more, wally. Just the ramblings of madness.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
hugs,
buddhakitty.
