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Mirrors
Passing by a mirror,
Peering at its image,
Taking a step back,
To take another glance,
Wondering if it's you,
Wondering if it's me,
Who is in this mirror,
Trapped once more,
Pale, yellow eyes,
Fair, white skin,
Faded silver hiar,
Young in years,
Knocking on the glass,
Asking for help,
All I can do is stare,
All I can do is walk away...
Peering at its image,
Taking a step back,
To take another glance,
Wondering if it's you,
Wondering if it's me,
Who is in this mirror,
Trapped once more,
Pale, yellow eyes,
Fair, white skin,
Faded silver hiar,
Young in years,
Knocking on the glass,
Asking for help,
All I can do is stare,
All I can do is walk away...
Published 13th Mar 2012
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13th Mar 2012 11:54pm
That Sucks!
(Not the poem,please don't misunderstand me)
Your only as old as you feel at times.I'm 46 that could be me?
good one!
(Not the poem,please don't misunderstand me)
Your only as old as you feel at times.I'm 46 that could be me?
good one!
15th Mar 2012 12:57pm
simple words that create a complex meaning, kudos!
there is a little spelling error, 3rd stanza 3rd line
there is a little spelling error, 3rd stanza 3rd line
16th Mar 2012 6:55pm
Should have caught that..I guess I skimmed a little too fast, hahaha. And thank you both the the complements! It means a lot!
~Pandora
~Pandora
