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..i can appreciate..
..the draped mammary sculptures..
..thus provided..
..flaunted under..
..limp and limber coddle curtains..
..and covering the peach cleft. barely..
..which incidentally dents against..
..in coveted and wet..
..overlapping shadows dancing..
..and recess in..
..the tell-tale creases..
..of the hardly hidden hollows..
..and in bumped-up tips..
..the loose veil’s beckon..
..in ripped fish meshes..
..and mauve heart cottons..
..or whites..
..(may i empty to these .?.).
..(orifice splendors .?.).
..(now that you’ve advertised your details)..
..(so specifically)..
..the draped mammary sculptures..
..thus provided..
..flaunted under..
..limp and limber coddle curtains..
..and covering the peach cleft. barely..
..which incidentally dents against..
..in coveted and wet..
..overlapping shadows dancing..
..and recess in..
..the tell-tale creases..
..of the hardly hidden hollows..
..and in bumped-up tips..
..the loose veil’s beckon..
..in ripped fish meshes..
..and mauve heart cottons..
..or whites..
..(may i empty to these .?.).
..(orifice splendors .?.).
..(now that you’ve advertised your details)..
..(so specifically)..
Published 30th Jan 2010
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31st Jan 2010 2:18am
It's all in the details, don't ya know. I like your style. Funny...it's what you don't say that grips my attention so. Enjoying you.
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31st Jan 2010 3:57am
what I don't say is as important as what I do say. I'm glad you dig my stuff.
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Anonymous
25th Feb 2010 00:20am
to create a very real and powerful narrative."Draped mammary sculptures" and "coddle curtains" were probably my favourites.
25th Feb 2010 00:45am
yeah this was written several years ago.. the second one is recent.. sometimes sequels are spread far a part.. and they're completely different.. this one was probably written around 2001 or 2002 and the second last year.. I have changed as a writer over the years as we all do.. at the time I was writing in a much more psuedo-classical way.. and yes a lot of metaphors.. now I try to be more blunt and in your face..
