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Ending Most Dreaded.
The color's gone from your face,
found dripping from your throat.
How could I do this?
Why could I do this?
I try and cease the crimson flow.
Your eyes, they do look pitiful.
And you cry, for you can't scream...
As I have ripped out your voicebox,
while you were lost in dreams.
Indeed, I watched you love another.
But you weren't mine to keep...
The jealousy, she took me over!
She made me havoc, wreak.
Now, I'm left a mess,
you're neck I've slit and shredded.
For my envy, your heart is stopped.
The ending I most dreaded.
found dripping from your throat.
How could I do this?
Why could I do this?
I try and cease the crimson flow.
Your eyes, they do look pitiful.
And you cry, for you can't scream...
As I have ripped out your voicebox,
while you were lost in dreams.
Indeed, I watched you love another.
But you weren't mine to keep...
The jealousy, she took me over!
She made me havoc, wreak.
Now, I'm left a mess,
you're neck I've slit and shredded.
For my envy, your heart is stopped.
The ending I most dreaded.
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mr. lewis!!
12th Mar 2012 8:12pm
this brings back the good days of english class!!! i love it >.<.. i really loved this one ya know?...great job dearest..
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re: mr. lewis!!
12th Mar 2012 8:15pm
thank you, kindly! mr. lewis wouldn't have liked this, i would've had to have gone to counseling.. and i did that enough in Health XD But once more, for good measure, thank you.(:
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12th Mar 2012 8:17pm
no problemo.. >.<.. i cant not like your poems lol. theyre too amazing..
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12th Mar 2012 8:20pm
sucking up, are we? XD my apologies for my brutal honesty with you last night, i was certain you were upset.
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12th Mar 2012 8:23pm
no!! im happy we shared info on that subject lol... and no kissing ass for me.. only my thoughts lol..
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Very very good!
12th Mar 2012 8:27pm
I love this piece! Your wordplay is vivid and again, very creative. It's been a very long time since I felt the anger portrayed here, derived from jealousy...it's a terrible thing but I promise you get tough to it with time! Great write madame :) x x
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re: Very very good!
12th Mar 2012 8:32pm
thank you.. it's been a very long time since i've been called 'creative'. i'd love to create something in words.. something like a picture. thank you for all the support you dish out! it helps bunches.. & i'm not exactly jealous of this anymore, thank goodness.. i wrote it long ago.(: Now my biggest threat is Jen Ledger (Skillet) XD
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12th Mar 2012 8:38pm
No threat at all :) and you create pictures with your words every time you write, perhaps your readers just suck! We should do an epic collabo sometime! x x
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Jeremy digs 'er pretty well.. XD & as long as it doesn't end up like my collaboration with the other gentleman. I was so pissed, he just like wrote a completely different something and pasted it on top of mine >.
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13th Mar 2012 00:53am
We can go line for line if you'd like, or AB AB, the trick is going to be finding a mutually enthralling subject. x x
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13th Mar 2012 3:43am
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13th Mar 2012 5:43am
Yet another extraordinary piece
12th Mar 2012 11:29pm
re: Yet another extraordinary piece
12th Mar 2012 11:38pm