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im scared
im scared
my arm is in pain
worser than what it usaully is
im scared im going to die
im so used to my arm covered in blood
but i wanna stop and i cant
i wish someone there
to tell me its okay
my arm is in pain
worser than what it usaully is
im scared im going to die
im so used to my arm covered in blood
but i wanna stop and i cant
i wish someone there
to tell me its okay
Published 30th Jan 2010
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30th Jan 2010 00:33am
I truly understand the meaning to this poem, and it's meaning, becasue I myself have been there.
You wrote this piece extremely well, and it will stick with me for a while.
A in the last like tell me it's okay, I understand that feeling, although if you look deep inside, You cant have people tell you it's okay, when they don't know that you are hurting, and that in itself is one of the reasons so many people nowadays are struggling with deep depression.
Because it is so hard to tell people how you are feeling and discuss it openly with them.
I wish you well x
Great piece x
You wrote this piece extremely well, and it will stick with me for a while.
A in the last like tell me it's okay, I understand that feeling, although if you look deep inside, You cant have people tell you it's okay, when they don't know that you are hurting, and that in itself is one of the reasons so many people nowadays are struggling with deep depression.
Because it is so hard to tell people how you are feeling and discuss it openly with them.
I wish you well x
Great piece x
30th Jan 2010 00:42am
I think a lot of people can relate to this piece. Well written and realistic.
I hope things get better for you.
I hope things get better for you.
31st Jan 2010 1:20am
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