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Girl in Water

A lost life - who's just begging to be free
A punished soul who has only begun
To understand her purpose and be
A true outcast in a place where you're shunned
A tub of water and cords extended
From her bathroom she did rest
Jumper cables upon her chest
This is where her sorrow would be ended -  
She has been through all the trials
Bleeding and the suffering  
Her friends had told her many lies
That she's charming;
Her eyes shine in the light
All she did was care  
For others who did not want to fight
For her to stay in this war
But she had no one to tell her the truth
The fact she is human and cannot handle the emotional scars
She took her final breath and tried swallowing the youth
The child in her looked at the stars
Her final decision is consumed by pain
And she can feel it set in her brain
That this tub of water is ever so cold
Her naked body is fused with water that sparks gold
The currents has one jolt
But the shocking water doesn't make her bolt
Cruel world, you take another life
Though it was her choice and not a knife  
She was young and sad
People make fun of her because she only had a dad
The teasing grew to her mother's abandonment
So she did give them a plan and it sent
To everyone's computer that it did play
And all it did say,
"To everyone who hates me,
I am finally free."
The water she falls into crackles  
On the surrounding walls; sparks, water and blood did speckle  
 
 
 
Note: This is a off the head poem and I wanted to try a it
Written by R4V3N
Published | Edited 2nd Apr 2012
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