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We were once before
through space
and time
we are getting to know
each other
all over again
maybe I am remembering
who you are
I have know you before
though every smile
every laugh
every fiber of you
feels so familiar
I've loved you before
a thousand years ago
in another space
inside this sphere
in some other existence
there was you and I
we were once before
and time
we are getting to know
each other
all over again
maybe I am remembering
who you are
I have know you before
though every smile
every laugh
every fiber of you
feels so familiar
I've loved you before
a thousand years ago
in another space
inside this sphere
in some other existence
there was you and I
we were once before
Published 12th Feb 2022
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12th Feb 2022 11:43pm
Love the hope of this one... smooth flow... nice cadance... great line breaks...
12th Feb 2022 11:47pm
Anonymous
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13th Feb 2022 00:14am
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13th Feb 2022 00:31am
I love your comment, thank you!
I'd like to think it's possible. But, who the hell knows. Sometimes, it sure feels like it.
I'd like to think it's possible. But, who the hell knows. Sometimes, it sure feels like it.
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
13th Feb 2022 00:32am
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13th Feb 2022 00:36am
Gosh yes! I mean who knows, right?
I'd love to think it's possible in some sort of way. Unfortunately, we will never know.
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I'd love to think it's possible in some sort of way. Unfortunately, we will never know.
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13th Feb 2022 3:14am
It’s such a complete feeling to experience that sense of soulmate. You expressed it very well. 😍 this!
13th Feb 2022 3:18am
Anonymous
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13th Feb 2022 3:20am
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13th Feb 2022 3:25am
13th Feb 2022 4:13am
Dear J,
Reflective and wonderful piece. This made me think of relationships that have cooled and grown a bit distant turning a corner and reigniting that flame that’s been simmering for a while. I really enjoyed the hope behind this poem. H🌷
Reflective and wonderful piece. This made me think of relationships that have cooled and grown a bit distant turning a corner and reigniting that flame that’s been simmering for a while. I really enjoyed the hope behind this poem. H🌷
13th Feb 2022 2:43pm
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