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Two gaze outside
watching raindrops
with window glass collide
silent island mid cacophonous café
reverie smashed by coffee, crème brûlée
cross candlelit table
eyes, hands, lips flirt
arms entwined
feed each other dessert
Image, by George Desipris, downloaded free from Pexels
Published 3rd Feb 2022
Author's Note
Okay, okay I know it's a skosh schmaltzy but isn't love a skosh or a barrel of schmaltz? At least to this betimes excessively romantic poet.
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3rd Feb 2022 2:26am
3rd Feb 2022 3:20am
3rd Feb 2022 7:53am
Dear GW,
I love shmaltz. How else is one supposed to get through a crap day? I think this is wonderful reminder to put the flirt back into play. Loved the scene, loved the message. Get your shmaltz on!
H🌷
I love shmaltz. How else is one supposed to get through a crap day? I think this is wonderful reminder to put the flirt back into play. Loved the scene, loved the message. Get your shmaltz on!
H🌷
4th Feb 2022 00:24am
The title called my attention... and I found this beautiful poem.
Congratulations !
... 😍👍
Congratulations !
... 😍👍
