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Memphis Skyline
Memphis Skyline
Pyramid,
Bridge,
Skyline,
Waterway....
Knock, knock,
Unlatch the lock....
An unknown
Becomes
Known,
As she
Eye slides
Her curves.
Names
Never
Meant much.
Breath
And
Consequence.
Daylight
Is
Still
A very
Long
Way away
Pyramid,
Bridge,
Skyline,
Waterway....
Knock, knock,
Unlatch the lock....
An unknown
Becomes
Known,
As she
Eye slides
Her curves.
Names
Never
Meant much.
Breath
And
Consequence.
Daylight
Is
Still
A very
Long
Way away
Published 31st Jan 2022
Author's Note
You don't have to go home....I'm in no hurry.
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24th Apr 2022 9:14pm
The whole poem seems to hinge on the middle there — the unknown becomes known. And then the whole game changes.
I enjoy the story telling element to this. Thank you.
-M
I enjoy the story telling element to this. Thank you.
-M
25th Apr 2022 5:03am
Yes, and the unknown.....becomes the basis for importance for those who cannot allow intimacy.
