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Do I fit?
do I fit
inside this place
the here
and now
the world
this sphere
in the quietness
of the night
do I fit
inside the dreams
that fill you
or am I
just another
puzzle piece
that just doesn't
belong
where do I fit?
inside this place
the here
and now
the world
this sphere
in the quietness
of the night
do I fit
inside the dreams
that fill you
or am I
just another
puzzle piece
that just doesn't
belong
where do I fit?
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Re. Do I fit?
30th Jan 2022 00:24am
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30th Jan 2022 00:25am
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30th Jan 2022 00:28am
Re. Do I fit?
30th Jan 2022 00:34am
You are one of the key pieces as if you are lost the puzzle can never be completed
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Re: Re. Do I fit?
30th Jan 2022 00:39am
Anonymous
- Edited 9th Apr 2022 5:45am
30th Jan 2022 4:38am
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Re: Re. Do I fit?
30th Jan 2022 4:39am
Re. Do I fit?
30th Jan 2022 9:54am
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4th Feb 2022 5:54pm
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5th Feb 2022 00:07am
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5th Feb 2022 1:58pm
Re. Do I fit?
30th Jan 2022 11:56am
A fractal structure becomes a language for the puzzling world you lead us in. I rarely find poems whose structure fits its content. That is a great strength I want to point out.
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Re: Re. Do I fit?
4th Feb 2022 5:55pm
Re. Do I fit?
31st Jan 2022 00:30am
to read your words
as you have laid them across this page,
oh how they just fit
combined with your poetic wit,
anxiety and confusion you do list
words, so would be missed
oh how they just fit
oh how you so do fit.
enjoyed how you shed light
in the words you do write.
as you have laid them across this page,
oh how they just fit
combined with your poetic wit,
anxiety and confusion you do list
words, so would be missed
oh how they just fit
oh how you so do fit.
enjoyed how you shed light
in the words you do write.
1
Re: Re. Do I fit?
4th Feb 2022 5:56pm
Re. Do I fit?
31st Jan 2022 3:21pm
Like a puzzle, you just need to place it where it belongs and wala you fit, completing the picture (life).
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Re: Re. Do I fit?
4th Feb 2022 5:56pm
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Aug 2023 5:45pm
3rd Feb 2022 11:16pm
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Re: Re. Do I fit?
4th Feb 2022 5:58pm
within myself is all that truly matters. I don't fit in a box nor do I try to limit myself in one either. Thank you for taking the time to send me your thoughts and words. I appreciate YOU.
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
12th Feb 2022 11:24pm
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Re: Re. Do I fit?
12th Feb 2022 11:28pm
Thank you for such a wonderful and sweet comment.
We are all meant to be here, yes, you are right here. Self doubt can be such torture at times.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
💜
We are all meant to be here, yes, you are right here. Self doubt can be such torture at times.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here. Much appreciated.
💜
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Dec 2022 00:45am
12th Feb 2022 11:30pm
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