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It's time to pay up.
He comes again demanding payment
Ha ha so you thought you lost me
These last few days
Thats just a little game I play
But now it's time it's time to pay
You may not have a good day
You may not have a smile
In your happiest moments
You shine brighter than the sun
This cannot be permitted
No it will not be allowed
You must swallow up darkness
you must put forth a frown
Ha ha so you thought you lost me
These last few days
Thats just a little game I play
But now it's time it's time to pay
You may not have a good day
You may not have a smile
In your happiest moments
You shine brighter than the sun
This cannot be permitted
No it will not be allowed
You must swallow up darkness
you must put forth a frown
Published 8th Mar 2012
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8th Mar 2012 3:29am
14th Sep 2012 1:27am
though we are often our own worse critics you i really dont believe that you feel that way about your own peice of work. its not really how you built the poem that determines the quality but the story you are telling or point your getting across. i actualy think its brilliant i the way that the real meaning of the poem isnt revealed enediately but causes the reader to peice it together in their mind. we are all better poets that we know or care to acknowledge.
