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Rhythm of Love
When I look into your eyes,
a river flows through me
The connection I feel with you,
In English or in Spanish,
there are no words to describe
Even though we're both far away,
you make every day a better day
Your voice,
resonates in my mind
My heart,
synchronizing in tune
to the rhythm of love.
a river flows through me
The connection I feel with you,
In English or in Spanish,
there are no words to describe
Even though we're both far away,
you make every day a better day
Your voice,
resonates in my mind
My heart,
synchronizing in tune
to the rhythm of love.
Published 6th Jan 2022
Author's Note
I wrote this for my new boyfriend (I'm 28, he's 30). We have only been dating for about a month now. We currently live an hour apart from each other. I want to recite this to him, but before I do that, I want to know some opinions. Is this poem too basic? Would a 30-yr old man enjoy this?
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7th Jan 2022 10:35pm
8th Jan 2022 5:02pm
Thank you very much for taking the time to read the poem and for your opinion. Hugs in return.
