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Island Time
it hits a little different in Bali
warm trade winds blowing from the east
surfing the waves of indiscretion
underneath a million wandering stars
embracing the moon
and her balcony of lust
biting into a delicacy of delight
and oh the night time view
pinned to the railing of truth
trusting not to fall
succumbed in the beauty
of nature's call
warm trade winds blowing from the east
surfing the waves of indiscretion
underneath a million wandering stars
embracing the moon
and her balcony of lust
biting into a delicacy of delight
and oh the night time view
pinned to the railing of truth
trusting not to fall
succumbed in the beauty
of nature's call
Published 16th Dec 2021
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16th Dec 2021 11:44pm
17th Dec 2021 00:53am
17th Dec 2021 3:38pm
So well said, it does hit a little different in Bali. This is really beautiful, I could feel the fresh island wind and the waves... See the incredible array of stars standing on the balcony of a villa in the jungle overlooking a waterfall... Waiting to go white water below... Pinned to the railing... oh yes! This place is designed for intimacy. ;)
17th Dec 2021 4:02pm
The picture you paint is delightful, the rush of the waterfall and the excitement, exquisite... thanks for joining my vision k xo
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