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I Feel Lost
Time heals a blanket of denial.
Moments of lucidity turn to shadows.
Purpose dissolves into obscurity.
All that is left is a casket of dust,
Scattered through the wilderness.
Moments of lucidity turn to shadows.
Purpose dissolves into obscurity.
All that is left is a casket of dust,
Scattered through the wilderness.
Author's Note
I don't know who I am anymore?
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Re. I Feel Lost
10th Dec 2021 11:40pm
Sometimes we do find ourselves not knowing who we are to ourselves lock in a world created by our lives in past and present of our future for we can get lost in the process of learning how to make a good decision 🙏
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Re: Re. I Feel Lost
11th Dec 2021 00:45am
I've gone through so many changes over the last few months. Still trying to make sense of it all. Like a kaleidoscope that has been shook and I'm waiting for it to settle, because the path ahead is unclear. I have never felt so lost.
Re: Re. I Feel Lost
11th Dec 2021 11:43am
I can relate to that statement as I am dealing with cancer treatments with chemotherapy just like you I'm trying to make sense of it all myself for I don't know what is waiting for me as I go through the process of change so I understand how you feel we just can't dwell in the fact that we feel lost during these periods of our lives we just gotta keep on PUSHING 🙏👊👊👊respect brother poet
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Re: Re. I Feel Lost
12th Dec 2021 00:20am
Thanks for your understanding. I wish you well with your treatment. Just keep pushing forward and stay positive. Sometimes we face difficult challenges. There is no easy route through life, but the most difficult situations make us stronger. Peace to you.
Re. I Feel Lost
11th Dec 2021 8:34am
Dear E,
Each sentence in this poem is a stand alone poem to me. You’ve beautifully and achingly expressed that feeling of being adrift and lost. While most can sort of understand this pain, they really don’t get it. Painfully raw and honest write. H🌷
Each sentence in this poem is a stand alone poem to me. You’ve beautifully and achingly expressed that feeling of being adrift and lost. While most can sort of understand this pain, they really don’t get it. Painfully raw and honest write. H🌷
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Re: Re. I Feel Lost
11th Dec 2021 10:33am
Thanks H for your beautiful words and understanding. I appreciate your comments. Poetry and writing has always been my anchor when I feel lost and confused.
Re. I Feel Lost
14th Dec 2021 5:31am
Sparse and beautiful, as life feels so often. I hope you find peace.
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14th Dec 2021 3:36pm
Re. I Feel Lost
25th Sep 2022 1:03am
"All that is left is a casket of dust,
Scattered through the wilderness."
Those lines are certainly tough but honest to the core. Finding ourselves is such a long journey, and just when we think we may be there, the road appears to be even longer, darker.
Hope you're feeling better about this.
Phenomenal write.
Scattered through the wilderness."
Those lines are certainly tough but honest to the core. Finding ourselves is such a long journey, and just when we think we may be there, the road appears to be even longer, darker.
Hope you're feeling better about this.
Phenomenal write.
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