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Dear Santa
In the song, she saw
Mommy kissing Santa
From my position behind the couch
Spying on Santa
I saw mommy approach
With her camera, all smiles
As she took the pictures,
Then she put the camera away
Approached Santa, and dropped her robe.
Yes, all the gifts were laid by the tree.
The last one to get laid was mommy.
A wonderful gift for Santa
Mommy kissing Santa
From my position behind the couch
Spying on Santa
I saw mommy approach
With her camera, all smiles
As she took the pictures,
Then she put the camera away
Approached Santa, and dropped her robe.
Yes, all the gifts were laid by the tree.
The last one to get laid was mommy.
A wonderful gift for Santa
Published 1st Dec 2021
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1st Dec 2021 5:27pm
1st Dec 2021 5:30pm
Anonymous
2nd Dec 2021 2:18pm
Hey Robert……I needed a lift of heart today…….I found it with your ink…….luv it….you’ve made me smile…...purple luv & hugs xo :)
2nd Dec 2021 3:04pm
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
5th Dec 2021 12:59pm
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5th Dec 2021 1:22pm
Thanks dear. Glad to see you back.... haven't see you in a while. Kisses, Robert.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
5th Dec 2021 2:55pm
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5th Dec 2021 3:58pm
?? Whatever do you mean?. PS: some of the words you choose sometimes freak me out. Are you versed in Old English...or is that a bit colloquiai in your area. (Where even are you from, exactly? (Can't even see where you are from from that flag on your bio). Kisses, Robert.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
5th Dec 2021 5:40pm
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5th Dec 2021 6:45pm
Keep cool and carry-on and all that..........so you get the runner up prize in that Christmas Crime competition. The winning submission was just tooooo good. As to the flag. Mist. True, One has to the decipher the ''God save the Queen'' one. Regards, Robert.
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Jan 2022 9:45pm
5th Dec 2021 7:20pm
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