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Enchantress
I am not a Goddess,
I am an Enchantress,
I am not a bride,
I am a wife
I am not a mother,
I am your partner,
I am a woman,
Treat me like a woman,
Respect me as a woman,
Discover my womanliness,
Appreciate my womanly traits,
Don’t ever let me wait,
I am your love game,
Let me play my role,
I am not just a hole,
You take me as a whole,
You touch me,
You kiss me,
You hug me,
You hold me,
You play with me,
You make love to me,
You unravel me,
I love you,
I get pleasure out of it,
I please you,
I seek you,
I fold in you,
I melt in you.
Published 24th Nov 2021
| Edited 20th Dec 2021
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In a friendly discussion, a woman who expressed her feelings and I put them in a poem. Please browse, read and comment.
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24th Nov 2021 6:20am
Liked the emotion you brought out. Favourite lines, for rhyme and for the frank sex advice:
Let me play my role,
I am not just a hole,
You take me as a whole,
After that point the poem waxes romantic and I like the reciprocity she welcomes:
.You touch me,
You kiss me,
You hug me,
You hold me,
You play with me,
You make love to me,
You unravel me,
I love you,
I get pleasure out of it,
I please you,
I seek you,
I fold in you,
I melt in you.
Let me play my role,
I am not just a hole,
You take me as a whole,
After that point the poem waxes romantic and I like the reciprocity she welcomes:
.You touch me,
You kiss me,
You hug me,
You hold me,
You play with me,
You make love to me,
You unravel me,
I love you,
I get pleasure out of it,
I please you,
I seek you,
I fold in you,
I melt in you.
24th Nov 2021 1:32pm
Thank you for reading my poem. Word by word and them analyse it tune, tone and gravity. I appreciate your feedback. I hope others also read and comment on it.
Love
KS.
Love
KS.
