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Silhouette of lust
You have deprived me of love so all I know know is lust.
Every where i must feed my hunger one night at a time no need for trust.
I cannot seem to control these sin infested thoughts .
I must turn them to reality And as I my mind slowly rots.
Back up nice and slowly ill be steadfast penetrating deep inside your slit.
I start to feel you shake my cum drenched cock rubs one your clit .
Now you dripping velvet curtains keep my cock so nice and warm.
Only peaking out for an instant the calm before the storm.
My momentum precise so hard and deep I pull the pin.
The grenade goes off inside your whom your my toy of lust and sin.
Every where i must feed my hunger one night at a time no need for trust.
I cannot seem to control these sin infested thoughts .
I must turn them to reality And as I my mind slowly rots.
Back up nice and slowly ill be steadfast penetrating deep inside your slit.
I start to feel you shake my cum drenched cock rubs one your clit .
Now you dripping velvet curtains keep my cock so nice and warm.
Only peaking out for an instant the calm before the storm.
My momentum precise so hard and deep I pull the pin.
The grenade goes off inside your whom your my toy of lust and sin.
Published 21st Nov 2021
| Edited 19th Nov 2024
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21st Nov 2021 6:48pm
22nd Nov 2024 10:53am
Whatever you changed made this a great read. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope you take this for how it is meant, you have a few spelling errors that need some help. I have made some changes. What do you think?
You have deprived me of my love, so all I know is lust.
One night at a time, to feed my hunger, there is no need for trust.
I cannot seem to control, these sin infested thoughts .
I must turn them to reality, as my lost mind slowly rots.
Back up nice and slowly, I will penetrate your slit.
I start to feel you shaking, My cum drenched cock rubs on your clit .
Your dripping velvet curtains, keep my cock so nice and warm.
Peaking out for just an instant, the calm before the storm.
My precise momentum, so hard and deep, I pull the pin.
The grenade goes off, inside your womb, you're my toy of lust and sin.
I hope you are not offended that I have edited and rewritten parts of your poem. What really caught my attention was whom instead of womb. Then once I got started, I went just a little crazy; sorry.
You have deprived me of my love, so all I know is lust.
One night at a time, to feed my hunger, there is no need for trust.
I cannot seem to control, these sin infested thoughts .
I must turn them to reality, as my lost mind slowly rots.
Back up nice and slowly, I will penetrate your slit.
I start to feel you shaking, My cum drenched cock rubs on your clit .
Your dripping velvet curtains, keep my cock so nice and warm.
Peaking out for just an instant, the calm before the storm.
My precise momentum, so hard and deep, I pull the pin.
The grenade goes off, inside your womb, you're my toy of lust and sin.
I hope you are not offended that I have edited and rewritten parts of your poem. What really caught my attention was whom instead of womb. Then once I got started, I went just a little crazy; sorry.
23rd Nov 2024 7:00am
Thankyou for the final edit, do you mind if i publish your edited version in place of the old versiom, and yes my punctuation and spelling need a bit of work. I gonna download one of those spelling and grammar app again . I'm grateful for your help 🥰
