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“Angel of sunshine”
Yes it’s true, so woe am I
I’ve a teardrop in my eye…
As I can’t escape emotions noose
Each time she lets her sun-shine loose
Can’t believe an angel stands nearby
The beauty of her soul makes me sigh…
Within the confines of this heart’s duress
In her, a bright glow, comforted…I nest
Praise be to the almighty’s sweet design
For giftin’ the world this “Angel of Sunshine…”
Published 10th Nov 2021
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Anonymous
10th Nov 2021 5:42pm
Rockin' with gratitude, PoetikOne.
If I could suggest anything, it's speeding up this line
"In her, a bright glow, comforted…I nest"
by trimming a syllable like so
In her comforting bright glow...I nest
If I could suggest anything, it's speeding up this line
"In her, a bright glow, comforted…I nest"
by trimming a syllable like so
In her comforting bright glow...I nest
