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In This Moment
It comes in explosions of suns,
Spilling forth in so many photons
Upon impact, in the initial sensation,
Disbelief in the background formation
For now -
You can only ever know
that
Everything
you
know
Have known
&
may know
Is lost in the frost
of this
frozen moment
Adjacent
to
lament
Oh…
So exquisite
So very
very
Exquisite.
Published 22nd Oct 2021
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23rd Oct 2021 5:20am
Dear CO,
Ooooooo. Super write. This had me thinking about passing into the next life. Everything I knew to be true on earth was obliterated by the white light and real truth was shown walking toward the light.
Then I read it again and got a totally different view. But I didn’t like that one. At all. So I reverted back to my original image above 😊
I always enjoy where your poems lead. You provide so much room for different thoughts. H🌷
Ooooooo. Super write. This had me thinking about passing into the next life. Everything I knew to be true on earth was obliterated by the white light and real truth was shown walking toward the light.
Then I read it again and got a totally different view. But I didn’t like that one. At all. So I reverted back to my original image above 😊
I always enjoy where your poems lead. You provide so much room for different thoughts. H🌷
24th Oct 2021 1:40pm
Original on point ma dear Honoria.
I so love and appreciate your
perspectives and astute intellect.
I am infinitely grateful for your presence,
on so many levels.
Your latitude of thought is truly amazing.
I so love and appreciate your
perspectives and astute intellect.
I am infinitely grateful for your presence,
on so many levels.
Your latitude of thought is truly amazing.
