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want
To feel your lips beneath my jaw,
To have you, need you and still want more,
To taste your excitement on your thighs,
To see you arch and close your eyes.
To hear you sigh,
To hear you moan,
To make you come,
When you answer the phone.
To feel your skin,
To pull you in,
To kiss you once,
The desirous sin.
To have you, need you and still want more,
To taste your excitement on your thighs,
To see you arch and close your eyes.
To hear you sigh,
To hear you moan,
To make you come,
When you answer the phone.
To feel your skin,
To pull you in,
To kiss you once,
The desirous sin.
Published 2nd Mar 2012
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2nd Mar 2012 2:01am
2nd Mar 2012 5:09am
Anonymous
2nd Mar 2012 7:25am
wow you painted a beautiful picture with this poem you talked about the human body without telling all you left things for the reader to entwine with your word usage was just awesome the poem flowed quite well a beautiful poem that i enjoyed reading so i say to you keep your pen flowing keep those writes coming
2nd Mar 2012 7:33am
2nd Mar 2012 2:38pm
I enjoyed reading this sensual and erotic poem about all the things you wanna see and hear from your partner. A smooth write.
2nd Mar 2012 5:30pm
2nd Mar 2012 6:59pm
It's simple, it reminds of those innocent days when the words fell into my lap, at they were basic, not over-thought. You create such a child like haven here, I can't wait to watch you grow, become more cynical and detailed.
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2012 4:09pm
"To have you, need you and still want more"i can so relate to this!enjoyed the read,welcome to DU
