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the ugliest person on earth
Why have I been cursed
as the most beautiful person on earth
where my looks have become a purse
from my shapely derriere
enticing men to play
thinking of all you can eat buffets
to my translucent skin
invoking the spirits within
why do you men get so maudlin
where my looks have become their sin
for when I use your lust
doing what I must
you throw me to the dust
calling harlot and whore
when I don't let you score
thinking these insults cut to the core
well here's a newsflash gentlemen
and something you need to ken
I live within my inner garden
working on my soul
holding true and staying whole
while you're paying the toll
as the most beautiful person on earth
where my looks have become a purse
from my shapely derriere
enticing men to play
thinking of all you can eat buffets
to my translucent skin
invoking the spirits within
why do you men get so maudlin
where my looks have become their sin
for when I use your lust
doing what I must
you throw me to the dust
calling harlot and whore
when I don't let you score
thinking these insults cut to the core
well here's a newsflash gentlemen
and something you need to ken
I live within my inner garden
working on my soul
holding true and staying whole
while you're paying the toll
Written by
Heart_of_Stone
(Rachela)
Published 18th Oct 2021
Author's Note
Written for a friend. I have neither a prefect body or mind.
Entered in Feminist poetry comp.
Entered in Feminist poetry comp.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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18th Oct 2021 7:12am
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Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 8:33am
I couldn't agree more. Of course, I left the judgement on who and what is ugly up to the reader. I like pointing out hypocrisy but I really don't intend to tell anyone how to life their lives. Hugs
Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 7:49am
Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 8:29am
The world runs on hypocrisy but that doesn't mean I have to like it. I feel a lot of angst when writing mean, it's very nice to hear positive words. Big hug
Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 8:48am
Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 10:42pm
Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 1:23pm
Quality write
Says a lot about beauty, attraction, lust and bad behavior
BIG LIKE
Says a lot about beauty, attraction, lust and bad behavior
BIG LIKE
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Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 10:17pm
The worlds oldest occupation. Always condemned, always desired. Thank you for your kind words, hugs and kisses.
Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 3:15pm
Yes I agree, the world runs on hypocrisy and it’s not confined to just certain areas it seems. I love, “I live within my inner garden working on my soul” if everyone went there the world would be a much more honorable and creative place. This is a nice piece to put out into the world.
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Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 10:34pm
This is a wonderful reply. To spend 5 mins inside your mind would be a treat [and maybe dangerous]. Thank you for the depth of your words.
Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 10:34pm
Content and character seem to be always put behind outer looks. I could never give myself to the superficial. Excellent write
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Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
27th Oct 2021 8:47am
I keep deleting comments for your reply. Lol, Your reply is as complicated as this poem, which is wonderful. So thank you
Re. the ugliest person on earth
18th Oct 2021 11:43pm
Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
27th Oct 2021 8:38am
Re. the ugliest person on earth
25th Oct 2021 00:45am
Beauty is more than skin deep and in my opinion if you have a good heart you are beautiful
Anyone who shares time with you.would see that plainly. My favourite saying is
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Great thought provoking read
Love and light
Ron xx
Anyone who shares time with you.would see that plainly. My favourite saying is
BE STRONG BE BEAUTIFUL AND BE YOU
Great thought provoking read
Love and light
Ron xx
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Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
25th Oct 2021 5:29am
Interestingly, I didn't stipulation who or what was ugly in this poem. Personally, I'm at peace with myself and no longer at war with my inner demons, sometimes I even invite them to tea. Hugs.
Re: Re. the ugliest person on earth
25th Oct 2021 6:51am
That was my own presumption usually if I write something like your piece I'd automatically write it from me. Thank you for putting me straight I guess it shows I'm not at ease with my inner demons
Love and light
Ron x
Love and light
Ron x
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