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Trance
I lay throughout the night
In a reverie that I create
I wander through my thoughts
One by one they violate
The blade it seems to come to me
Without too much uncertainty
The walls shake around me
As I silently present what is pain to me
The blades power dominates but relieves
And drains the agony from inside
The tears fall so willingly
But the calm is the want that guides
In a reverie that I create
I wander through my thoughts
One by one they violate
The blade it seems to come to me
Without too much uncertainty
The walls shake around me
As I silently present what is pain to me
The blades power dominates but relieves
And drains the agony from inside
The tears fall so willingly
But the calm is the want that guides
Published 1st Mar 2012
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1st Mar 2012 9:19pm
pain can be intense
especially if you are unable to vent
or rant about the pain you feel
but God's Power....It Only Heals....
especially if you are unable to vent
or rant about the pain you feel
but God's Power....It Only Heals....
1st Mar 2012 9:22pm
1st Mar 2012 9:29pm
1st Mar 2012 9:30pm
Anonymous
1st Mar 2012 10:35pm
LeesAngel,
The calm after the storm is the greatest calm of all. Sometimes the silence still cuts. Enjoyed.
tornado
The calm after the storm is the greatest calm of all. Sometimes the silence still cuts. Enjoyed.
tornado
2nd Mar 2012 6:35am
Anonymous
3rd Mar 2012 00:02am
i liked your poem to me it showed a little different than you normally write like a different side of you i have not seen yet. i know Hsnnah you write from within your heart and soul thats what i like about your poems i dont ever feel a faker in any of your poems and to me that is a good and perfect gift that not everybody has. love and hugs to you my friend
3rd Mar 2012 9:36am
What a wonderful comment!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!! I'm glad you liked it!!!!!!!! That's the only way I know how to write- (with a little help from a thesaurus every now and then lol)!!!!!!!!!!!!
