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Just a glance
The mirror shows
us every line of hard earned rhyme.
The mirror shows
a place where all our past will go
a cloudy window into time
fresh faces that I thought where mine
the mirror shows
us every line of hard earned rhyme.
The mirror shows
a place where all our past will go
a cloudy window into time
fresh faces that I thought where mine
the mirror shows
Published 29th Sep 2021
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Trying a rondelet
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29th Sep 2021 10:55pm
Well done! This is a form that’s been on my list for awhile. Maybe I’ll give it a go.
11th Nov 2021 8:15pm
30th Sep 2021 5:34am
Dear R,
I like how this reflected (no pun intended) what the mirror can see- past and through what stares back from it. While I’ve decided to cover all mine in black I enjoyed your illuminating poem. H🌷
I like how this reflected (no pun intended) what the mirror can see- past and through what stares back from it. While I’ve decided to cover all mine in black I enjoyed your illuminating poem. H🌷
11th Nov 2021 8:17pm
HaHa H, could you lend me some of your covers, there seems to be a stranger in mine at the mo 🤓
30th Sep 2021 12:39pm
11th Nov 2021 8:17pm
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Oct 2021 10:04pm
8th Oct 2021 10:03pm
Beautifully written, very clever.
Tried and beautiful. I enjoyed reading your rondelet, thanks for participating.
LJ
LJ
11th Nov 2021 8:13pm
