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Cast Upon Love’s Pyre (Nonet)
slipping past the guards of apathy
I steal your cool indifference,
casting it upon Love’s pyre
lest we remain frozen;
I give my heart’s key
to lock away
your cold feet,
tempting
fate
I steal your cool indifference,
casting it upon Love’s pyre
lest we remain frozen;
I give my heart’s key
to lock away
your cold feet,
tempting
fate
Published 29th Sep 2021
Author's Note
Written for the Nonet competition
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29th Sep 2021 5:49pm
Dear L,
Awesome! It’s a beautiful poem of love and fabulous style that you’ve crafted so gorgeously. I loved the mix of romantic and modern language. The tug of heartstrings combusting by the pyre’s fuel. Wonderful write. All the best for this comp. H🌷
Awesome! It’s a beautiful poem of love and fabulous style that you’ve crafted so gorgeously. I loved the mix of romantic and modern language. The tug of heartstrings combusting by the pyre’s fuel. Wonderful write. All the best for this comp. H🌷
29th Sep 2021 10:35pm
29th Sep 2021 10:53pm
I love a good form poem. Especially when they are done well! You did the form justice, friend!
29th Sep 2021 11:29pm
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19th Oct 2021 2:58am
Great spill Luna. This comp has really brought some nice entries and yours is pretty amazing.
Good luck in the comp.
Good luck in the comp.
25th Feb 2022 4:50pm
I absolutely love the challenge that the different forms of poetic structure offers us. This is a great example of a Nonet, and I felt every word. Thank you for that. I am inspired by this.
25th Feb 2022 5:54pm
