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Hell
The fall of it all,
the
fall
into
hell:
it begins with
the brandishing
&
breaking
of
surreality,
like
riptides
of
the
Inside
Tailor
made
to
Torment
&
tear
apart
into
Pieces & pieces
of
Lament.
Published 26th Sep 2021
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26th Sep 2021 5:43pm
28th Sep 2021 12:52pm
26th Sep 2021 9:17pm
I do love the delivery of this two-sided piece,.. you have created the stages formed in the opinion of the mind. Heaven and Hell is a realistic state of existence, found to give us free will of the heart, or the right to choose which avenue we will venture until.
This piece is even more eloquently composed than your peace of Heaven... the parables are the same, yet, the state of mind plays the culprit which one to believe, which ideology to follow the course of its pursuit
Very nicely stated my Intellectual Prophesier
This piece is even more eloquently composed than your peace of Heaven... the parables are the same, yet, the state of mind plays the culprit which one to believe, which ideology to follow the course of its pursuit
Very nicely stated my Intellectual Prophesier
28th Sep 2021 12:54pm
I appreciate your perspective on both of these pieces, SKC...
Which seems to me, to be fitting for one who embodies the aspects of duality, or, understands the applications of polarity.
You have presented me with thought provoking information.
I thank you most sincerely.
Which seems to me, to be fitting for one who embodies the aspects of duality, or, understands the applications of polarity.
You have presented me with thought provoking information.
I thank you most sincerely.
Sometimes, it's hard to determine which is which.... ie: Heaven or Hell?
I have to say that I'm totally head over heels about this formatted flow of yours.... The Cipher 'crawl' down the page.... It works marvelously....
Utterly eye catching and it punctuates your pieces to perfection 👌🏻
Killer poems, my lovely poet 🙏🏻
digging them both -
🌹 - B
I have to say that I'm totally head over heels about this formatted flow of yours.... The Cipher 'crawl' down the page.... It works marvelously....
Utterly eye catching and it punctuates your pieces to perfection 👌🏻
Killer poems, my lovely poet 🙏🏻
digging them both -
🌹 - B
28th Sep 2021 12:56pm
I completely agree with you B.
Thank you for these very beautiful words.
They mean so very much to me.
You are a magical creature.
Thank you for these very beautiful words.
They mean so very much to me.
You are a magical creature.
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